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This is a huge departure from what I usually write. I went in for a darker tone than usual and something outside my comfort zone. A new character and the start of a new story-arc.

As always, feedback is always welcome, even the harsh ones :)

Thanks for :iconasuroth: for his great help at editing.

Felarya (C) :iconkarbo:
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Brilliant tale! Starts the typical way with over confident explorers and then bam! A twist about a gal chasing down a legendary entrance to the Green Hell. Never thought it was hard to find that myself personally, but then again Avian didn't have a map like me. ^^;

Then a naga shows up and it all seems said a done but Colt's smoke bomb bought them some time till they blundered into the net of somebody who reminds you that not matter how tough you think you are there's always a more dangerous predator in Felarya. Be respectful at all times. o-o;;; Then it concludes with an interesting note showing the mother may have a black heart but her daughter is pure and innocent. Brilliant that! Argues that be raised by a pure blooded antagonist doesn't mean the child always turns out that way, even in Felarya.

In short? I loooooooved this fic!